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The vacation

Can we leave?

By AlexisPublished 2 years ago 5 min read

Chapter 1

Once upon a time there was a girl and her name is linda. Linda grew up with her mother and 5 brothers and 6 sisters. she was happy she wanted to go to one place so badly she couldn't stop talking about it day and night she would tell her mom & her sibling about it. Linda would tell them ... .Oh I’m sorry her siblings names are Shamika,Tanika,Tiara,Treyvon,Diamond,Sidney,Dominick,Gavon,Antoney, Santeigo,Britney.

Anyway like I was saying, Linda would tell them how pretty the clouds are and how sparkly the water looks when the sun hits it. Oh My bad Linda’s Mom's name is Kiera

Kiera: Linda please honey you know I love hearing you talk about that beach but we can’t afford to go right now I’m sorry sweetie

Linda: But….

Gavin:It’s ok sis we'll get enough money I promise.

Britney: Ha don’t listen to him we are never going to that beach so you might as well stop talking about it.

Santiago: Oh shut up Britney don’t tell Linda that, she’s our little sister after all we can get enough money for her so we can all go to this beach. It sounds like a fairytale and I want to see it.

Linda: Yea, Santi you just gave me an idea we can start selling cookies and Tanika you can sell your drawing ooooh and Trey you can ummmmm do whatever it is you do.

Sidney: Whoa Whoa Whoa Slow down sis you have to breath

Linda:Gasp…. Your right I could have fainted

Kiera: You girls are a handful but if you can rais $20,000 then I don’t see why we can’t go.

Everyone is excited except for (smart mount aka Britney).

Britney: So who told yall that I wanted to go to that made up place.

Tanika:Girl please that place is not made up and you know it Linda saw it in a movie and that was the actual place the actress was at so sit down boo boo.

Shamika: Yea sit down!

Kiera: Don’t talk to my baby like that Bri remember me Mother over here I’m still sitting at this table you ain't too old to get beat.

Britney: (Ma forreal she said sarcastically) I’m 24

Kiera: And! Im 40

6 years later, Linda finally I did it, she can finally Go

Mom,are you here? We can go now to the place I've been talking about for years

Oh sure we can go to "that place that's totally real"

Girl don't talk smart to my baby and of course we remember lets go right now

12 hours later and

Girls & mom : We’re are we?

Linda : It’s ok y’all we have to hunt for it like Treasure.

Bri: …… We …… Have …….. To …… Look FOR THIS “BEACH” LIKE WHERE LOOKING FOR TREASURE! What the heck is wrong with you, it is a “Beach” we are supposed to fly out and then bam a beach are you dead serious.

Alright calm down it shouldn’t take that long to find this place ok I know it sounds bad but we can do it just trust me…

Gavin: We believe you ( He Turns his head and looks at Bri with a crazy smile and he says right Bri)

Bri : I hate it when he looks at me like that I have to say something before his eyes get, oh Gosh too late, ummmm right we and especially me Totally believe you. Well what are we waiting for? Let's go everyone last to find the beach is a rotten egg.

Gavin: Good (his psycho face is gone now)

As everyone runs behind Bri Kiera yanks Gavin by his arm and she says you know darn well that she hates it but good job you put her in check I was just going to slap her across her mouth. Umm mom there leaving us what oh right let’s go, y’all slow down.

Umm honey it’s getting dark I mean have you look around you, Look child

Oh I didn’t notice, because the stars are bright almost like the sun out. we’re going the right way but I guess we could rest good night y’all.

Meanwhile Linda isn’t sleeping. She is way too excited so she decided to look for some food and the sun is just now coming up. Yes she stayed up all night anyway.

Ummm mom wears Linda idk well we have to find her Hey y’all good morning I. I made breakfast and now eat, come on. Alright slow down we coming Click

Kiera: everyone get behind me

Linda: Oh don’t be scared. I found this man in the woods. He's really nice and he’s been looking for the beach for 26 years.

Everyone: 26 years! Are you out of your mind? We are not about to do all of that for a beach.

Mystery guy : Hey everyone oh umm I hope i'm not interrupting

Linda : No your fine guys this is Ray

Ray : I heard yelling, are you guys ok?

Kiera : (Slowly trying to pull Linda away from Ray) Ps : Linda’s not Budging. So Linda tells us you've been looking for the beach we are trying to find for … wow I can’t say it

Trey: Well I can ummm sir you are out of your mind you’ve been looking for this beach for 26 years. You are crazy.

Ray : Well well well aren’t you smart anyway let's go.

Linda : I’m leading! Got it.

Ray : yea sorry

This man is creepy but he’s also cute. girl please . See what us guys in the family have to go through

Linda : Are y’all coming? or nah

Yes!

9 days later ok I swear we are almost their

If you say so. Don’t lose hope we are going to make it

4 years later

Bri and Kiera: ok we had it no I’ve had it I’m cold and wet where is this beach you know what, you want us to die don’t you well guess what I’m going home.

Oh come on look

See all we have to do is walk for 6 miles across the ocean and take a left and then bam we should be there. Come on please, Fine alright let's go, my feet hurt when are we going to get their Linnnda can we stop please.

Yes sure get in oh wow why is this boat so big y’all get in the boat.

Dominique: I think I’m seasick

Nika: Oh suck it up

Mika: What she said.

Bri: I’m cold and seasick

Linda : Found it welcome to the beach.

What Beach? It only shows up WHEN you kill somebody

What are you crazy I’m kiddy it only shows up on the 4th of July and that is a month and a half away.

One month and a half later

Linda:Finally

Everyone else except for Ray: We did it I hope your happy

Linda looks at everyone yes, come on let’s party

They all feel asleep

Ray in a secret cave: I did it, they will never leave this beach.g

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