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The Snow Snake

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By Taviii🇨🇦♐️Published 9 months ago 4 min read
The Snow Snake
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The Legend of the Snow Snake

Long ago, when the winters were fiercer and the snow piled high like mountains, there was a small village tucked away at the edge of the northern woods. The villagers were hardy folk, used to the long, dark winters, but there was one thing they feared more than the cold itself — the Snow Snake.

They said the Snow Snake was born from the first blizzard of the world, made of pure ice and mist, with eyes that glowed like the northern lights. It slithered silently through the deep drifts, invisible to most, waiting for those who wandered too far from home.

One bitter night, when the winds howled like wolves and the snow blinded even the strongest men, a boy named Eli ventured into the woods. His sister had fallen ill, and he believed he could find the rare Frostbloom flower — a plant said to cure any sickness — if he was brave enough to face the storm.

Eli wrapped himself in furs, lit a lantern, and stepped into the raging snow. The world outside the village was a swirling blur of white. He stumbled and fell more times than he could count, but he never gave up. The thought of his sister’s pale face kept him moving.

Hours passed, and the forest grew thicker. Suddenly, the snow beneath him shifted unnaturally. A low hiss echoed through the trees. Eli froze, heart pounding. From the corner of his eye, he saw it — a long, shimmering body weaving through the snow like a river of frost.

The Snow Snake.

It was beautiful and terrible all at once, its body translucent, its breath freezing the very air around it. It circled Eli, curious but not yet striking. Remembering the old stories his grandmother used to tell, Eli reached into his coat and pulled out a charm she had given him — a small stone carved with ancient runes.

The Snow Snake paused. Its glowing eyes locked onto the charm, and for a moment, the storm seemed to hold its breath. Eli, trembling, held the charm high and spoke the words his grandmother had taught him:

“O spirit of snow, I seek your mercy. Let me pass, for love guides my way.”

The Snow Snake stared for a long moment, then slowly, it lowered its head. Where its body touched the snow, a path appeared — clear and safe. Without a sound, it slithered away into the mist, leaving Eli alone, but unharmed.

Following the path, Eli found the Frostbloom growing in the heart of a frozen clearing. He plucked it carefully and raced back to the village, where his sister was saved.

From that day on, the villagers no longer feared the Snow Snake as a mere monster. They honored it as a guardian spirit — a test for those whose hearts were pure and whose cause was just.

And when the blizzards returned each year, they would leave offerings of carved charms and whispered prayers at the edge of the woods, hoping the Snow Snake would remember their kindness. Of course! Here’s the continuation:

Years passed, and the story of Eli and the Snow Snake became a legend in the village. Children grew up hearing about the boy who had braved the storm with nothing but a heart full of love and a simple stone charm. They believed that as long as they stayed true and pure, the Snow Snake would protect them too.

But legends have a way of changing with time.

One winter, many decades later, a stranger came to the village — a man dressed in black furs, with eyes cold as frozen lakes. He called himself Malric. He scoffed at the villagers’ tales, mocking their charms and rituals. He claimed that the Snow Snake was no spirit or guardian, but a creature that could be hunted — and he intended to capture it.

Against the warnings of the elders, Malric set out into the woods on the night of the year’s fiercest blizzard. Armed with steel traps and poisoned spears, he laughed at the wind and vanished into the storm.

For three days and nights, the storm raged stronger than any before. The villagers stayed huddled indoors, their windows shuttered, their fires burning low. No one dared step outside.

On the fourth morning, the storm ended. The village awoke to a strange silence. Curious and fearful, they ventured out — and there, at the edge of the woods, they found something chilling.

Malric had returned — but not as a man. Frozen solid, his body was twisted in terror, his eyes wide and staring. Around him coiled a massive trail of ice, too perfect to be natural. It glistened under the weak sunlight, leading back into the heart of the forest.

The elders knew: the Snow Snake had judged him. It was not a creature of mercy for all — it was a guardian of the old ways, a protector of balance. Those who acted with greed and cruelty would not find safe passage.

From that day, the villagers no longer spoke of the Snow Snake as a simple guardian. They called it the Keeper of Winter’s Justice. Offerings at the forest’s edge became more sacred, done with reverence and humility. Children learned that bravery alone wasn’t enough — it had to be tied to kindness, respect, and truth.

And sometimes, on the coldest nights, when the wind howled just right, the villagers would say you could hear a soft, low hiss through the trees — the Snow Snake watching, waiting, and protecting the land from those who would bring harm.

Eli’s stone charm, now faded with time, still hung in the village hall, a reminder of the first boy who faced the Snow Snake… and earned its blessing.

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Taviii🇨🇦♐️

Hi am Octavia a mom of 4 am inspired writer I write stories ,poems and articles please support me thank you

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  • Tim Carmichael9 months ago

    Sometimes, the hardest challenges are the ones that teach us the most about what truly matters.

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