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"The Great Race"

"Where Confidence Meets Consistency"

By BAKHTIAR UDDINPublished 9 months ago 3 min read

In the heart of the Evergreen Forest, where tall trees whispered ancient secrets and the wind played with leaves like a child with toys, animals of all kinds lived in peace. Among them were two very different creatures—Toby the Tortoise and Roko the Rabbit.

Roko was known throughout the forest for his incredible speed. He could dash from one end of the meadow to the other before most animals could blink. Proud of his ability, he often boasted to the others.

“Why walk when you can zoom?” he would say, leaping high into the air. “Fast is best!”

Toby, on the other hand, was slow. Very slow. He moved at a pace that tested the patience of even the calmest squirrel. But Toby was thoughtful, quiet, and respected for his wisdom. He didn’t rush, but he always arrived, and he always finished what he started.

One sunny morning, the animals gathered in the clearing for their usual chit-chat. Roko bounced in, full of energy.

“Another beautiful day!” he shouted. “Perfect for a race! Who wants to try their luck against me?”

The clearing fell silent. No one dared challenge the fastest creature in the forest.

Except one.

“I will,” said a calm voice.

The animals turned to see Toby, munching on a leaf, blinking slowly.

Roko burst out laughing. “You? You’d be lucky to make it halfway before nightfall!”

Toby simply nodded. “Maybe. But let’s see.”

The other animals buzzed with excitement. A race between Riko and Toby? It was unthinkable. Yet it was happening.

The next morning, animals from all corners of the forest gathered to watch. Squirrels clung to branches, birds perched on high vines, and even the shy deer crept closer to see the event unfold. The course was set: a winding path through the forest, ending at the old hollow tree at the top of Sunset Hill.

As the owl referee counted down, Roko stretched his legs dramatically.

“Ready to eat my dust, Toby?”

“Just enjoy the journey,” Toby said with a smile.

“GO!”

With a cloud of dust and a blur of gray fur, Roko shot forward like a lightning bolt. The crowd gasped and cheered. Toby started too—slowly placing one foot in front of the other, head low but steady.

Within minutes, Roko was far ahead. He leapt over logs, dashed past rocks, and laughed as he looked back. “This will be the easiest race I’ve ever won!”

Halfway through the race, Roko reached a shady spot under a tree. The breeze was cool, the moss soft, and the sun warm.

“I’m so far ahead,” he said, yawning. “Might as well take a quick nap. That tortoise won’t catch up until next week.”

He curled into a ball and was soon fast asleep.

Meanwhile, Toby moved forward. He didn’t rush. He didn’t worry. Step by step, breath by breath, he followed the path. He admired the flowers blooming along the trail, nodded politely to a passing butterfly, and slowly inched toward the goal.

Hours passed.

The sun dipped lower in the sky, painting the forest in gold. Birds flew home. The crowd at the finish line waited in silence, wondering when Riko would appear.

But it wasn’t Roko they saw.

It was Toby.

Slow, steady, and still smiling, he reached the top of the hill and crossed the finish line.

Cheers erupted. The forest roared with applause.

Moments later, Roko woke with a start. “What time is it?” he cried, then gasped as he realized how long he had slept. He leapt up and dashed toward the finish, only to see the crowd surrounding Toby, lifting him up in celebration.

Roko stopped, ears drooping.

Toby walked over and looked up at the stunned rabbit. “You’re fast, Riko,” he said. “But sometimes, speed isn’t everything.”

“I... I thought I had time,” Roko muttered.

“You did. But you wasted it,” Toby said kindly.

From that day on, Roko was a changed rabbit. He still ran fast, but he learned to respect patience and persistence. And Toby? He became a forest hero—not because he was the fastest, but because he never gave up.

Every year afterward, the animals of Evergreen Forest held a race in honor of that day. They called it The Great Race, a reminder to everyone that even the slowest can win if they are determined, steady, and never stop moving forward.

And so, in the whispering woods and among the roots of ancient trees, the story of Toby and Roko lived on—a tale of humility, growth, and the power of perseverance.

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