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"The Call of Darkness"

Part 1: The Old House

By Md JunayedPublished 11 months ago 3 min read

Part 1: The Old House:

The old house stood at the very edge of the village, its crumbling walls and broken windows watching over the land like an ancient sentinel. Its wooden door, once painted a vibrant red, was now faded and peeling, held together by rusted hinges. The house had been abandoned for as long as anyone could remember, and yet it seemed to carry with it a certain presence that was impossible to ignore.

The villagers whispered about it. Some claimed it was cursed, while others believed it was haunted by the spirits of those who had once lived there. It had been built many generations ago by a wealthy family, but one fateful night, the family had disappeared without a trace, leaving their home behind. No one knew exactly what had happened, but the house was never the same after that night.

The windows, once bright and inviting, were now like dark, hollow eyes, peering out into the world. The garden, once well-tended, had grown wild, with vines crawling up the walls and weeds overtaking the paths. Birds no longer perched on the roof, and the air around the house always seemed heavy, as if the very atmosphere was different from the rest of the village.

Locals avoided the area entirely, crossing to the other side of the road if they had to pass near the house. It was said that at night, when the wind howled through the trees, strange sounds could be heard emanating from within the house—soft footsteps, whispers, and even the sound of a piano playing, though no one had ever seen any sign of life in the place.

Children dared each other to venture close to the house, but none ever went inside. The bravest ones, who had tried to touch the iron gate at the entrance, ran back in terror, swearing that they had felt a cold, invisible hand brush against them. Over the years, the house had become a symbol of fear, a place that represented all the things that people were afraid to confront, a mystery that no one dared to solve.

But Ravi was different. He had always been the curious one, the boy who asked questions no one could answer. He didn’t fear the house; in fact, he was drawn to it. While the other children spoke in hushed tones and crossed the street to avoid even glimpsing the house, Ravi found himself thinking about it all the time. What really happened to the family that lived there? Why had they vanished so mysteriously? What was the truth behind the rumors?

His curiosity grew with each passing day. He would often sit at the village square, listening to the elders tell stories about the house, absorbing every detail. Sometimes, he could hardly sleep at night, thinking about the mysteries hidden within its walls. The more he learned, the more determined he became to uncover the truth. To Ravi, the house was not a place of fear; it was a challenge, a puzzle that needed to be solved.

But despite his resolve, there was something deep inside him that made him hesitate. There was a part of him that feared what he might find inside. After all, everyone else was scared for a reason. The stories, the warnings—maybe there was more to them than he had thought. But then again, Ravi didn’t believe in ghosts or spirits. He was sure there was a logical explanation for everything.

The night he decided to explore the house was like any other. The moon was hidden behind thick clouds, and the village was quiet, with only the sound of the wind rustling the trees. Ravi had been waiting for the right moment, and tonight, he felt ready. He grabbed a lantern, tucked it into his bag, and set off down the winding path that led to the house.

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Md Junayed

"Voice is my identity, emotions in every word! 🎙️✨ Bringing stories to life, one sound at a time. Stay tuned & feel the magic! 🎧🔥"

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  1. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • Md Nahid11 months ago

    Wow ! Excellent writing.

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