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"The Call of Darkness"

Part 11,12 & 13: The Price of Freedom,The Final Choice & The Price Paid

By Md JunayedPublished 11 months ago 3 min read

His heart raced. Was this it? Had he made the ultimate mistake?

He fought to regain control of his mind, his body trembling with fear, but it was no use. The darkness was too powerful, too overwhelming. His vision blurred as he felt himself being pulled into the abyss.

Part 11: The Price of Freedom:

Ravi’s world went black.

When his eyes opened again, he was no longer in the room with the book. He found himself standing in a vast, empty void. The air was thick, heavy with an oppressive silence. The ground beneath his feet was nothing but mist, and all around him was an inky blackness that seemed to stretch on forever. There was no sky, no stars, no horizon—just the endless void.

For a moment, Ravi thought he had died. He thought he had been consumed by the darkness, swallowed whole by the ancient evil he had released. But as his senses returned to him, he realized something was wrong. He could feel a presence—an entity—looming over him. And then, from the shadows, a figure emerged.

It was the same figure he had seen in the house, the one that had spoken to him in the room with the book. But now, the figure was not a mere shadow. It was real—solid, towering, and terrifying. Its eyes burned with an unholy fire, its mouth twisted into a grin that sent a chill down Ravi’s spine.

“You should not have come here,” the figure said, its voice resonating in Ravi’s mind. “You have freed me, but you have also damned yourself.”

Ravi’s heart pounded in his chest as he took a step back. He was trapped. There was no escape, no way out of this realm of darkness. The figure moved toward him, its presence suffocating, and Ravi realized that he was standing at the precipice of something far darker and more ancient than he had ever imagined.

“What do you want from me?” Ravi asked, his voice trembling.

The figure’s grin widened.

“Your soul.”

Part 12: The Final Choice:

Ravi’s breath caught in his throat. His mind raced, trying to find a way out, but the figure loomed over him, its dark power overwhelming. He could feel the cold, ancient force pressing in on him, and for the first time in his life, he felt truly helpless.

But then, as the figure’s hand reached out toward him, Ravi’s thoughts turned to the manuscript—the ancient book he had read aloud. The key to everything lay in those pages. The answer to his survival, to his escape, was hidden within the very words that had brought him here.

He focused on the images that flashed through his mind—the strange symbols, the warnings, the power that had been contained within the house for centuries. The manuscript had not just told the story of the entity; it had shown him a way to stop it.

He reached into his pocket and pulled out the key—the ornate key that he had found in the chest in the basement. It was the same key that had been mentioned in the manuscript, the key to closing the door that had been opened. His hand trembled as he held the key up to the figure.

“This is not over,” Ravi said, his voice steadying. “You may have been freed, but you won’t take me.”

The figure paused, its eyes narrowing.

“You think you can stop me?” the figure growled.

“I don’t think so. I know I can,” Ravi replied, his voice firm.

With a final, desperate effort, Ravi plunged the key into the air, and as he did, the darkness around him shattered. The figure howled in rage as the shadows evaporated, the oppressive void disappearing as the light returned. The ancient entity screamed in fury as the power it had sought to claim was ripped from its grasp.

And just like that, Ravi was back in the house—alone, but free.

Part 13: The Price Paid

Ravi stood in the middle of the house, his heart still racing. The air was thick with the residue of what had just happened, but the house no longer felt alive. The presence that had haunted him, the dark force that had sought to claim him, was gone. For now.

He looked down at the key in his hand, now cold and lifeless. The battle had been won, but at what cost? The house had been freed from the entity, but Ravi knew that the darkness had not been destroyed—it had only been banished.

And that, he realized, was the price of freedom.

(The end)

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Md Junayed

"Voice is my identity, emotions in every word! 🎙️✨ Bringing stories to life, one sound at a time. Stay tuned & feel the magic! 🎧🔥"

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  • Md Nahid11 months ago

    Wow!

  • Alex H Mittelman 11 months ago

    Very scary! A good call to darkness indeed!

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