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The Bridge Where Lost Souls Whisper

A mysterious crossing between memory, regret, and second chances

By Omid khanPublished about 2 hours ago 3 min read

Everyone in Greyhaven knew the bridge.

It curved across the Blackmere River like a broken spine, its wooden planks twisted by decades of storms, its iron rails rusted the dark red of dried blood. No matter the season, fog clung to it like a living shroud. Even under the fiercest summer sun, cold mist seeped from beneath its boards — as if something below was breathing… waiting.

Children were forbidden to go near it.

Old men whispered prayers when passing.

And travelers arriving after dusk were warned:

“Do not stop on the bridge. And whatever you hear… do not answer.”

They called it The Bridge Where Lost Souls Whisper.

No one remembered when the voices began.

Some claimed it started after the great flood swallowed half the town a century ago. Others believed it followed the fire at the old asylum on the hill, when dozens fled screaming into the night — many never found.

But everyone agreed on one truth.

The bridge spoke.

Not loudly.

Not clearly.

Just enough to make you listen.

Elijah Moore returned to Greyhaven after fifteen years.

He had left as a boy — the night his sister Clara vanished.

She was seventeen, full of laughter, always humming while brushing her hair. That evening she’d said she needed fresh air and would walk to the river. Their mother slept. Their father worked late.

Clara never came back.

Searchers found only her shoes near the bridge.

No body.

No tracks.

Only fog… and whispers.

Elijah fled weeks later, carrying guilt like a stone in his chest.

If only he’d gone with her.

If only he’d stopped her.

If only he’d listened when she said she felt “called” to the water.

Now grief had dragged him home.

And the bridge was still there.

Waiting.

That first night, fog rolled thick as wool.

Elijah stood at the roadside staring at the dark silhouette of the bridge, his pulse hammering.

The town lay unnaturally silent.

No crickets.

No wind.

Only the slow creak of aging wood.

Then the whisper came.

Not one voice.

Many.

“Elijah…”

Cold slid down his spine.

“Help us…”

“Come closer…”

“Listen…”

The warnings echoed in his mind.

Do not answer.

But one voice rose above the rest.

Soft.

Familiar.

“Elijah… it’s cold here.”

His breath shattered.

Clara.

The sound was perfect.

He stepped onto the bridge.

The planks groaned like tired bones.

Mist wrapped around his ankles like living smoke.

The whispers surged.

Memories flooded his mind — not his own.

A mother leaping after her drowning child.

A soldier hanging himself after war broke him.

A runaway slipping in rain and splitting her skull.

A boy following voices into darkness.

All of them trapped.

Not dead.

Not alive.

Bound to the bridge.

Bound to regret.

Bound to the moment they fell.

“We cannot leave,” the bridge murmured through a thousand mouths.

“We were forgotten.”

“We were lost.”

The fog parted.

Clara stood before him.

Pale as moonlight.

Hair floating like it drifted underwater.

Eyes hollow yet tender.

“You came back for me,” she whispered.

Tears streamed down Elijah’s face.

“I never stopped looking.”

“I know,” she said softly. “But the bridge chose me.”

Understanding struck like lightning.

The bridge fed on sorrow.

On guilt.

On broken hearts.

It didn’t kill.

It persuaded.

It whispered until stepping forward felt like peace.

“Come with me,” Clara said, reaching out. “We won’t hurt anymore.”

Behind her, dozens of shapes emerged — men, women, children — eyes glowing with desperate hope.

The bridge pulsed like a heartbeat.

For one terrible moment… Elijah wanted it.

To stop aching.

To rest.

To be with her.

Then he remembered her laughter.

Her dancing barefoot in the kitchen.

Her dreams of seeing the ocean.

Clara had loved life.

This was not her.

This was pain wearing her face.

“I’m sorry,” Elijah whispered. “You wouldn’t want this.”

Her image flickered.

The fog twisted violently.

The whispers turned sharp.

“STAY.”

“YOU BELONG HERE.”

“WE NEED YOU.”

Hands of mist clawed at his arms.

The bridge shrieked like something alive.

Elijah ran.

Fog chased him.

Voices screamed.

But the moment his feet hit solid ground —

Silence.

The mist vanished.

The bridge stood still.

As if nothing had happened.

Elijah told the town everything.

Some laughed.

But elders turned pale.

They confessed disappearances always followed tragedy.

Funerals.

Breakups.

Loss.

Always.

Together they closed the bridge.

Barricades.

Lights.

Warnings.

And slowly…

The whispers faded.

Fewer vanished.

Greyhaven breathed again.

Elijah stayed.

Some nights, near the river, he heard faint humming on the wind.

Not calling.

Not trapped.

Just remembering.

And the town learned a truth it would never forget:

Some places aren’t haunted by ghosts.

They are haunted by sorrow.

Pain opens doors.

Loneliness invites darkness.

And if you listen long enough—

It will answer back.

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