
The paralysis that held him broke in an instant. His instincts took over, and he turned to flee. Twigs snapped beneath his feet as he sprinted back toward the cabin, lungs burning with effort. The beam of his flashlight bounced wildly, casting erratic, shifting shadows along the path.
But the faster he ran, the further the cabin seemed to stretch away. The trees blurred together in a never-ending corridor of darkness.
Then, just as he felt his strength failing, his foot hit the wooden steps of the porch.
The door, which he had left slightly ajar, now stood wide open. And in the doorway, a figure stood waiting.
Not human.
Not alive.
Not dead.
Just… waiting.
Part 2: The Silent Watcher:
Tushar’s breath came in ragged gasps as he skidded to a halt on the wooden porch. His legs trembled beneath him, his mind struggling to process the horrifying sight before him.
The figure in the doorway was not human. It had the shape of a man, tall and looming, but its form was shadowy, shifting like smoke caught in a breeze. There were no eyes, no discernible features—only darkness, a void in the shape of something once human.
Tushar wanted to scream, but his voice refused to obey. His body felt frozen, paralyzed under the weight of an unseen force. The thing in the doorway did not move. It simply stood there, watching.
Then, it whispered.
"Leave this place… before it’s too late."
The voice did not come from its mouth—because it had none. It resonated in the air around him, in his own mind, as if the forest itself was speaking through the entity. The words slithered into his ears like tendrils of ice, sending shivers down his spine.
Tushar’s heart pounded against his ribs, a frantic drumbeat of terror. Every fiber of his being screamed at him to turn and flee, to escape this cursed place. But something kept him rooted to the spot.
Perhaps it was curiosity.
Perhaps it was fear.
Or perhaps… it was the realization that he might not be able to leave even if he tried.
Summoning every ounce of courage he had left, he managed to croak out a single word.
"Who… are you?"
The shadow didn’t respond. Instead, it began to move—slowly, unnaturally, as if gliding rather than walking. It stepped out of the doorway, onto the porch, and the temperature around Tushar dropped instantly. His breath became visible, forming small white clouds in the freezing air.
A flicker of movement from the forest caught his eye.
He turned his head slightly, and his blood ran cold.
More figures.
Dozens of them.
Emerging from the trees like wraiths, their forms shifting and pulsing like living shadows. They did not make a sound. No footsteps, no whispers—just an eerie, suffocating silence as they advanced.
Tushar stumbled back against the wooden railing of the porch, his mind spiraling into panic. This isn't real. This can't be real.
But it was.
The shadow in the doorway raised one elongated arm and pointed directly at him.
Tushar’s entire body stiffened. A suffocating pressure crushed his chest, making it impossible to breathe. It felt as if invisible hands were wrapping around his throat, squeezing, pulling him forward. His flashlight slipped from his grip, clattering onto the wooden porch.
The moment the light hit the shadowy figure, it recoiled slightly, its form flickering like a disrupted signal. For a fraction of a second, Tushar thought he saw something beneath the darkness—something skeletal, something hollow.
And then, suddenly, he was falling.
Not backward, not forward—but into darkness itself.
A suffocating void swallowed him whole, and his screams were lost in the abyss.
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Nice