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Scene-based Narrative: The Art of Captivating Storytelling

Exploring the Five Principles of Scene-based Storytelling

By Yunah FanPublished 2 years ago 3 min read

It is important to note a key difference in the realm of storytelling, where spinning a ‘good yarn’ is not enough, but rather the mastery of narrating one. If all elements of an article: topic selection, logical framework, and raw materials fit together harmoniously, the soul lies in the mastery of storytelling.

When the act of ‘telling a story well’ is considered in place of a ‘good story,’ it becomes an obvious question as to why. It is for the simple reason that it is not always easy to establish what constitutes a good story. On many occasions, authors find motivation within their direct environment and life experiences. So, the priority of an author shifts towards their ability to transform an average narrative into something magnificent, at which they can consistently succeed, rather than strive for a mysterious ‘good story.’

The question is: what makes writers distinct enough to bring ordinary things to life? It is the type of question that deserves a deep analysis.

Scene-based Narrative is a methodological approach I have developed over the years of writing and teaching.

First and foremost, in order to fully understand the concept of ‘Scene-based Narrative’, we shall travel back to a time more than a decade ago; on January 16th, 2008, at the end of the International Consumer Electronics Show (CES), Bill Gates bade farewell to the empire he had spent years erecting with precision, symbolizing this as an end of an era. At the same time, in another event, Steve Jobs marked the beginning of another era by introducing the MacBook Air, a new product into the market.

Laptops had never been so compact and magnificently designed before. When Jobs introduced this revolutionary product, he avoided using meaningless superlatives such as ‘extreme thinness’ and managed to convey a vivid image: ‘It’s so thin that you can even put it into an envelope left open on your desk in the office.’ The term ‘extreme thinness’ may not be relatable to everyone, but the image of fitting into an office envelope excellently illustrated thinness in action.

Take into account a familiar tale:

It was one of those stirring spring mornings when the crowded Parisian streets were teeming with life, and the elderly blind beggar put up a board bearing the mournful plea, 'Blind since my youth, to live is a challenge.' Unfortunately, this call for help did not move many passersby. Then there came an unexpected response: a passerby poet stopped at his side as if moved by something within. Hoping for some alms, the old man turned toward him and nodded thankfully. Instead, what the poet said was, "I’m just a poet who doesn’t have much money, but I can give you an ode. All you need to do is change this sign and watch how the empathy will flow."

The poet turned the signboard from a simple statement of fact to a heartbreaking expression by an act of writing, "Spring has arrived, yet I cannot behold her" As the poet had predicted, people who walked by and read the sign were impelled to help out.

Although the phrase "Blind since youth, life is a struggle!" presents a true sense that blindness brings about challenges to survival in any form of living, it was, however, unable to ignite a fire of compassion among many people. In contrast, 'Spring has arrived, yet I cannot behold her' resonated universally, painting a vivid picture of the beggar's plight.

Advertising luminary Claude Hopkins once remarked,

Impressive claims are made far more impressive by making them exact.

The techniques used by the poet and Jobs strive to render abstract ideas into reality through concrete stories that resonate with audiences. Scene-based Narrative can be defined as a literary technique that portrays elaborate, fragmented, and ambiguous concepts through vivid, meaningful, and comprehensible sequences.

This is the essence of 'Scene-based Narrative.'

Defined as a narrative technique that substitutes abstract, disjointed, and esoteric concepts with concrete, focused, and widely understood scenes, Scene-based Narrative epitomizes a 'less is more' approach to storytelling.

So, how does one harness the essence of Scene-based Narrative in their writing? By adhering to these Five Cardinal Principles:

  1. Prioritize the conclusion.
  2. Forge an emotional gateway.
  3. Cultivate conflict and contradiction.
  4. Paint vivid character portraits
  5. Attend to minute details

(If you are interested in these five principles, please leave your valuable comments. I will explain them in detail in my next article.)

A scene-based narrative successfully combines two different writing techniques, namely fragmentary composition and deep exposition. It manages to keep the elements of speed, conciseness, and focus inherent in fragmentary reading, yet respects the human intelligence and gravity that comes with comprehensive coverage. These two refined ways involve taking critical scenes from the slice style and narrative skill from the deep text. This would emerge as a highly sophisticated way of creating written content suitable for a dynamic streaming media landscape.

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Yunah Fan

An author, musician, and photographer.

Currently residing in Singapore.

A published writer that has written for GoodNovel and many other online publications.

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  • Alex H Mittelman 2 years ago

    Great work! I like this. Well written! 😇

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