“Parallel Hearts”
– same love story, two endings: one joy, one loss.

Parallel Hearts
There are two versions of this story.
Both begin the same way.
Both start with the same boy and the same girl — and a city that felt too big for two hearts that small.
But in the end, only one of them ends with laughter.
The other ends with silence.
1. The Beginning
They met at a coffee shop that didn’t even serve good coffee.
Aiden came every morning with his laptop, typing with the focus of someone trying to write himself out of reality.
Lena came every afternoon with her sketchbook, filling pages with faces she’d never met.
One day, their schedules overlapped.
One spilled coffee, the other apologized.
And just like that — a spark.
They began talking about the small things: songs that sounded like rain, movies that broke them, and the strange loneliness of being surrounded by people who didn’t see you.
By the end of that first week, they were inseparable.
By the end of that month, they were in love.
And by the end of that year, their friends said things like, “You two are meant to be.”
They almost believed it.
2. The Turning Point
Love is rarely lost in an explosion — it fades, quietly.
Like a candle that keeps burning after the room goes dark.
For Aiden and Lena, it started with missed calls and unfinished sentences.
He was chasing deadlines; she was chasing dreams.
He stayed up late writing; she stayed out late painting.
Their love — once constant — began to feel like two clocks ticking at different speeds.
Yet, every night, no matter how far apart they drifted, they still left a message:
“Goodnight, my heart.”
It was small. But it meant everything.
Until one night, she didn’t reply.
3. The Split
Here the story divides — like a road branching into two impossible directions.
Version One: The Joy
The morning after their fight — the one where words turned to knives — Aiden ran through the rain to find her.
He didn’t care how it looked.
He just knew that if he didn’t say it now, he might never get another chance.
He found her at the pier, sketchbook in hand, tears mixing with the drizzle.
“Lena,” he said, breathless. “I’m sorry.”
She looked up, hesitant. “For what?”
“For forgetting that love isn’t something you schedule between work and sleep. It’s something you show — even when it’s inconvenient.”
Her eyes softened. “You think words fix everything?”
“No,” he said. “But they can start again.”
She smiled — small, tired, real.
Then she reached for his hand, cold from the rain, and whispered,
“Then start.”
And so they did.
They moved into a small apartment with leaky windows and too many plants.
They argued about dishes, bills, and whose turn it was to buy milk — but always found their way back to laughter.
Aiden published his novel, dedicating it to “The artist who painted color back into my life.”
Lena’s art was exhibited in a gallery for the first time.
When she gave her speech, she looked at him and said,
“For the boy who taught me that love is a masterpiece you never finish.”
Years later, they sat on that same pier — older, slower, but still together.
And when the sun dipped below the horizon, he whispered,
“Goodnight, my heart.”
She smiled.
“Goodnight, my writer.”
And somewhere between the sky and the sea, their hearts stayed in sync.
Version Two: The Loss
The morning after their fight, Aiden didn’t run.
He told himself she needed space, and that tomorrow would be better.
But by the time he realized “tomorrow” wasn’t coming — she was gone.
She’d taken the train to another city — an artist’s residency she’d applied for months ago but never told him about.
A clean break, she’d written in a note left on the kitchen table.
No anger. No goodbye. Just silence.
He read it again and again until the words blurred.
Days passed. Then weeks.
He kept sending messages — short ones, hopeful ones, desperate ones.
“I miss you.”
“I’m sorry.”
“Please, just tell me you’re okay.”
None were answered.
So he stopped writing her.
Instead, he wrote about her.
Every page of his next novel bled with what-ifs and could-have-beens.
When it was published, critics called it “achingly beautiful.”
He called it “a funeral in disguise.”
Years later, at a book event in another city, he saw a painting across the room — his face, rendered in watercolor, half-smiling, half-broken.
The title read: “Parallel Hearts.”
And below it, the artist’s name: Lena Mireau.
He stood there for a long time, staring at the image — at himself, at her version of him, at the life they could have had.
He never spoke to her again.
But sometimes, when the night was quiet, his phone would light up with an old message thread —
and at the very top, her last unread text still waited:
“Goodnight, my heart.”
He never deleted it.
4. The End
Two versions.
One filled with love that lasts.
One filled with love that lingers.
In one world, they found each other.
In the other, they became each other’s ghosts.
And maybe that’s what love really is —
a story that exists in both timelines at once:
the joy of what was,
and the ache of what could have been.
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Ali Rehman
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