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Poetic Nature Personification

Some landscapes do not forget the ones who once listened.

By Abuzar khanPublished 6 months ago 4 min read

The river knew her name long before she ever arrived.

It had tasted her in the wind, caught her scent in the petals that floated past. It murmured her syllables through the moss, echoing them in droplets that slipped over stones polished by centuries of waiting.

She came in spring, with books under her arm and loneliness sewn into the seams of her sweater. The trees rustled in welcome. The pine-scented breeze tugged gently at her hair as if to say, At last.

She sat on the riverbank every evening at golden hour, sketching the currents, scribbling half-poems in the margins of a notebook too old for its cover to stay closed. She hummed when she thought no one was listening. But the river listened. The river always listened.

To her sorrow.

To her wonder.

To the questions she never dared to ask aloud.

The sun dipped below the horizon one evening, and she whispered, “Do you remember?”

And though no one else would have heard it, the river sighed, “Yes.”

Because she had been here before.

Not just once. Not just in this life.

In another time, she had danced barefoot across this same soil. Braided reeds into her hair and called herself a daughter of water. The river remembered her laughter echoing across its surface, remembered how she used to speak to it as if it were a friend. A confidante.

She had promised never to leave.

But lifetimes are long and memory is short—for humans, at least.

Still, the river had waited.

It watched the world change. Forests thinned. Roads carved their scars across once-untouched land. And still it flowed. Still it held her name between its currents like a lullaby it refused to forget.

And now—she had returned.

Wearing a different face. Carried by different grief. But still her.

One afternoon, a storm rolled in sudden and loud.

She stayed beneath the willows as the rain came down, her clothes soaked, her hands trembling. Her tears blended with the drops sliding down her cheeks.

“I don’t know who I am anymore,” she confessed, voice fragile as the wings of a moth.

The river rose slightly, curling toward her feet. It did not speak in words—not exactly—but it wrapped her in silence so soft it felt like a lullaby. Pebbles clicked gently beneath the surface. A leaf spiraled in an eddy like a memory trying to form.

“You are the one who listens,” the river seemed to say. “The one who returns.”

And though she did not fully understand, her heart quieted.

The days passed.

She began leaving offerings—small things.

A flower tucked into a crevice of rock.

A feather.

A stone shaped like a heart.

“I brought you something,” she would say. And the river would sparkle in reply, its current catching sunlight just so.

One morning, she dipped her fingers into the water and whispered a line of poetry: May my pain become part of the earth and no longer mine to carry alone.

The river drank it in, grateful.

Every word she gave became part of its flow. Her sadness joined old stories etched into its bed. Her hope, fragile as spring frost, sank into the sediment to sleep beside ancient secrets.

One twilight, she came with red-rimmed eyes and a shaking breath.

“He left,” she said. “He said I was too much. That I feel too deeply. That I make everything a metaphor.”

The wind stilled.

The birds fell quiet.

And the river, patient and unfazed, reached up with a ribbon of water that kissed the back of her hand. As if to say: Good.

She laughed through her tears. “You’re the only one who doesn’t tell me to be less.”

And again, the current whispered her name.

Not the one she had been given by parents or teachers or lovers who wanted her small. But the name made of water and fern, of forgotten songs and wild things. A name that pulsed behind her ribcage when she touched tree bark or stood barefoot in cold streambeds.

She had never said that name aloud.

But the river had always known it.

In time, she began to glow again.

Not brightly.

Not like fire or sun.

But softly, like moonlight through fog.

Strangers started smiling at her in markets. Children looked up and tilted their heads as if they could hear a song behind her silence. The baker gave her extra rolls without charging. The world noticed her in small, kind ways.

But the river knew it was not new.

She had always carried magic.

It had simply been buried beneath years of noise.

On the last day of summer, she stood on the bank with bare feet and a half-packed suitcase.

“I don’t want to go,” she said. “But I think I need to. Something in me says I’m ready.”

The river shimmered with approval. Its flow quickened, as if excited for her.

“I’ll come back,” she promised, placing her notebook on the ground, filled with poems that no longer ached.

“I’ll always come back.”

The river did not answer in words.

Instead, it pressed one last wave to her toes—cool, grateful, eternal.

She turned and walked away, not knowing the way the water shimmered behind her or how the wind clapped softly through the leaves in a kind of farewell.

That autumn, the river changed.

Not in any way a passerby would notice.

But the trees leaned closer. The birds sang more gently near its edges. The stones on the riverbed hummed with her voice—echoes of the poems she had left behind.

And at dusk, when the light bent just right, her name could still be heard in the whisper of the current.

Not the one she signed on paperwork.

The other one.

The one that meant she had been seen by the earth.

And loved by the river.

And remembered.

Always remembered.

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