The Static Hum
Some roads don't lead home, they lead into the quiet hum of nothing.

The air on the platform tasted like old rust and forgotten rain. Elias pulled the collar of his threadbare coat tighter, the fabric scratching at his neck. His duffel, one measly bag, felt lighter than the hollow ache in his chest, an ache that had burrowed deep and set up shop weeks ago. He watched the train pull in, a long, dark serpent of ancient steel, its breath a sigh of steam that dissipated quickly into the cold, a fleeting ghost in the fading light. This was it. The last one. The one to wherever.
He found an empty compartment, third car back. The seats were worn velvet, faded green, patterned with generations of grime and forgotten stories. A faint smell of stale cigarettes and something sweet, sickly, clung to the air. The window, grimy and streaked, offered a blurred view of the dying city lights, each one a pinprick of a life he no longer felt part of. He settled in, sinking into the sag of the seat, the weight of a thousand undone things pressing down, making his shoulders ache.
The whistle shrieked, a raw, metal cry, and the train lurched. A shudder ran through the carriage, a deep, rumbling groan that vibrated up through the floorboards, through his bones. The city began to slide away, its edges blurring into a smear of orange and grey. He watched it go, feeling nothing but a dull, pervasive numbness. He wasn't running from anything specific, not anymore. He was just running. Running until there was no more road.
Hours passed, or maybe it was only minutes. Time had become a liquid thing, sloshing around, shapeless. The rhythmic clack-clack of the wheels on the tracks was a constant, mind-numbing drone, pulling him deeper into himself. The landscape outside transformed, buildings giving way to skeletal trees, then to vast, empty stretches of dark field, interrupted only by the occasional, lonely farmhouse light winking in the distance, a star in a personal void. He imagined the people inside those houses, warm, alive. The thought brought a dull throb to his temples.
He closed his eyes, but that was worse. Her face, vivid and sharp, bloomed behind his eyelids. Not the sick, gaunt face from the hospital, but her, laughing, sun in her hair, arguing good-naturedly about where they should go for their anniversary. The memory was a shard of glass, twisting in his gut. He opened his eyes quickly, blinking away the sting, focusing hard on the rain starting to lash against the window, blurring the already indistinct world outside.
The carriage was mostly empty. A few other figures, huddled in their own private cocoons of silence and shadow. An old woman with a bundled scarf, her eyes closed, mouth a thin line. A young man, face hidden behind a newspaper, its pages yellow with age. No one spoke. No one met anyone else's gaze. It was a train of ghosts, moving through a landscape of absence, each on their own journey to nowhere, or somewhere just as indistinct.
He felt the train slow, a long, drawn-out sigh of metal and steam. Then it stopped. A jarring halt that made his body pitch forward before he caught himself. The clack-clack was gone, replaced by the whine of cooling metal and the distant howl of wind. He frowned. No station. Just blackness outside the window. A sense of wrongness, a prickle of unease that was almost a welcome sensation after the relentless nothing.
A tired voice, the conductor's, echoed down the carriage. "Folks, this is it. End of the line." No one stirred. He repeated himself, a little louder this time, his voice raspy. "This is as far as she goes. Last stop." Elias felt a strange tremor run through him. This wasn't a town, wasn't even a crossroads. He peered through the rain-streaked window. A vast, dark plain stretched out, endless under a bruised, starless sky. A few distant, flickering lights, like dying embers, suggested maybe a forgotten outpost, a few shacks lost to the world.
He stood, his legs stiff, his back screaming. He grabbed his duffel, the weight still negligible. Other passengers slowly, reluctantly, began to gather their things. The old woman looked at him then, her eyes ancient, seeing too much, understanding everything. She offered no words, just a slow, solemn nod. He nodded back, a silent acknowledgment of their shared plight.
Stepping off the train was like stepping into another dimension. The wind hit him, cold and sharp, carrying with it the smell of damp earth and something indefinable, something wild and untamed. The train, a hulking shadow, began to hiss and sigh again, preparing for its return journey, leaving them here. Stranded. He watched it pull away, its red taillights shrinking to pinpricks, then vanishing into the black. He was alone, standing on a patch of gravel beside a forgotten track, the wind biting at his face. Nothing but the vast, empty night and the static hum inside his head.
About the Creator
HAADI
Dark Side Of Our Society



Comments
There are no comments for this story
Be the first to respond and start the conversation.