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Your poem jumped at me

a poem response

By DarkosPublished 3 years ago 2 min read
collage 2022

Your poem jumped out at me

Pointing all that I haven't seen before in you and in my life no matter what

I still do me for my own conscious thoughts

Your poem scarred me not once I swear I think you wanted to make me feel unsure and less confident in who I really am

Your poem told me that you are getting bored so easily that sign revealed more than others could see and believe

Your on going and overall longing for that sun melted with your own boring plant of word and applause.

You haven't even made a one single request to manifest what truly yours playing hero around the midst.

I haven't went so far that time for you because I blindly loved truly unconditionally the real true of you

From far away and distanced distance that no longer hurts at all I see things without the cloudy moist

I don't pray I don't wait I don't trust your blurry thoughts

Your persona do not feel for me like someone I really want

My efforts and involvements went truly to the core my heart was speaking purely with every inch of my soul

Please do no longer write about me and my very unknown thoughts

Don't long, don't beg, don't manipulate my every word.

I adjust myself to the real realm of life where lies are no longer the circus parade

Your every emotional touch had it effects for a while but how do you think I will function giving all my heart and soul to the blind ?

That's not where I used to walk and not where I will even go on or try to be in advance I cherish the being in the form just to be for me and on my own truly never alone

That's all the result of a loving love that never seem to be or happen truly to the very of its deepest core.

My thoughts are running away from what is shallow to go deep I just discovered all and have seen more than I really do wish and that's enough to heal enough to be

For what is not I can't just be free

That's not how you truly make a sense of life and just simply be to just be

I need to be free enough of these bollocks that nobody seem to see but me

I discovered more of you than other can sense I created an image that I just wanted to believe in and praised

Not very fast I learn to let go but once I did heal for real it will never catch me more or twice more I even sense your activity without reading your words

I don't keep a hate or anger after all

I also don't carry any kind of love for such cruel soul

I hope you are done with it all if not

I guess that's not my issue anymore

I completed my mission so I can just move on

And you can carry on helping the others to not to grow more alone such brutal paradox you cause to some

The Simple Adios !

As there will be no forgiveness if you keep on destroying all that another pure soul achieved through pain and suffering huge daily effort to just be alive and go on

Don't be another kind of Moron !

Accept and Move on !

A-hoy !

sad poetry

About the Creator

Darkos

Alien

writing in the moment

channels: https://www.youtube.com/@Healingestures

For HSP mainly : patreon.com/healingawakening

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