You drank me away
In a sea of booze
Bottle lays empty on the table,
and the harsh words from your lips sting.
Drank your fill, yet I was full;
words can wear down a soul.
You drank me away.
The door creaks shut.
I tiptoe
softly.
Free.
About the Creator
Kate Bolton
Growing up, the woods at the end of my street led to a lovely stream with a tiny waterfall; I called it 'Clover Falls'. I would sit near the stream with a pad and pen writing poetry and stories, dreaming of becoming a famous poet one day.
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Comments (14)
Sad but realistic poem. Going around attempting to learn about poetry. Nicely Done!!
Congratulations! Sadly vivid imagery.
Every line of this is a masterpiece. I adore it! Big congrats on placing!!
Wow! The sensory images were so spot on! Stunning nonet! Congrats!
You just told the story of my divorce in these 9 lines 🥹🫶🏻🌟 Well done. A deserving challenge placement! ❤️👌
I love your nonet - congratulations on your win!
Drank your fill, yet I was full; words can wear down a soul. Damn. That is a poetic masterclass right there. Congratulations!! This is fantastic.
Congratulations!
Visceral imagery, I love it. Congratulations!
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Congratulations on your story! This is a very unique explanation of someone leaving a severe alcoholic. It is very well written.
"Drank your fill, yet I was full;" That line was so deep! Your poem was so poignant but I loved that she was free at the ending!
Excellent piece
You drank me away - you captured a lot in this poem, I loved it!