
you can't write that
i just did
but but but ...
like a fly at a closed window
my feelings
don't care
our secrets
don't share
but you said...
no i didn't
...something about forever
yeah and all the time in the world
you promised me forever
forever stayed where it was
but i've moved on since then
those frayed hands of time
they were ours you said
they weren't yours or mine
you said we had time
no...i said we had a time
that's not fair
just like life
you can't write that
i just did
but but but ...
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!
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Comments (1)
Better not tell anyone that you’re writing about them, good or bad, doesn’t matter. People don’t like that. Better for them to discover that some characters are based on them, it’s always safe, the same as imagination. But the best is when you know everything what you wrote, who is based on who and what on what, that’s a pure thrill for the writer. Great idea with the picture- can as a noun and a verb! Clever :)