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You can change

Concrete poem

By Erica WilliamsPublished 19 days ago 1 min read
You can change
Photo by Edward Howell on Unsplash

You can change and make things better in your life,

Oh if only you believe,

If you matter and get it ;

Oh ! If you seen it of what I saw you'll get it,

You will be thankful when you see it,

More thanful when you do it in front of the person that asked,

More thanful when you don't shit on them either,

Oh if only you can believe that you are willing to change,

If only you saw it during your dark shadows ;

And not let it consume you,

Oh if only,

If only you knew;

If you seen what I seen,

And make it new,

Then you will see the change in you.

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About the Creator

Erica Williams

I am a knitter , crocheter and I love to write. i am bron and raised on the South Side of Saint Louis, Missouri ( Go Cards !!) aandddd I love writing poetry.

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