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You Broke My Rainbow

Took my colourful sky away

By Marie381Uk Published 10 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

You Broke My Rainbow

You came with light in stormless eyes,

A whisper sweet, a veil of lies.

I built a bridge from dusk to dawn,

Believed in color, then it was gone.

Red for the fire I thought was love,

Orange for warmth I dreamed enough.

Yellow for laughter you never meant,

Green for hope—now crooked, bent.

Blue was the calm you stole from me,

Indigo drowned in your apathy.

Violet died on a sharpened word,

The last I spoke, the last you heard.

You cracked the sky and let it bleed,

Stripped my prism down to need.

Now all I see is black and grey.

You broke my rainbow.

You walked away.

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Mark Graham10 months ago

    A poem that will take your breath away in hopes that one will learn lessons well. Good job.

  • Ellie Hoovs10 months ago

    "stripped my prism down to need" wow - if that isn't every narcissist ever! This is brilliant.

  • A beautiful way of explaining feelings, thankyou for sharing xx

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