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Love in 50 Words Challenge

By Andrew C McDonaldPublished 12 months ago 1 min read

Woven Strands

Morphing from silk

To hardened steel

…..

Binding, loosing

Pulling, releasing

Chains unreal

…..

Your presence

Steals my essence

Vaporized as mist by sun

…..

Lives intertwined

Hearts beat in twain

Separate as one

…..

Your life before mine

Your happiness my goal

Your touch makes me whole

love poems

About the Creator

Andrew C McDonald

Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.

https://www.amazon.com/Killing-Keys-Andrew-C-McDonald-ebook/dp/B07VM843XL?ref_=ast_author_dp

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran12 months ago

    Awww, this was so sweet! Such a lovely poem!

  • verse voyager12 months ago

    This is beautiful ☺️☺️

  • Mother Combs12 months ago

    beautiful, Andrew

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