e x p r e s s i o n
of
t r a n s c e n d e n t
beauty
c o s m i c
animation
w a l k i n g
the
e a r t h
i l l u m i n a t e
being
p o w e r e d
by
our
b r i g h t e s t
star
a s t r o n o m i c
powers
a l i g n e d
for
y o u r
birth
y o u r
e x i s t e n c e
is
n o t
a
m i s t a k e
it’s
a
m a c r o c o s m i c
m i r a c l e
y o u
were
b o r n
y o u ' r e
the
m o s t
m a g n i f i c e n t
pieces
of
s t a r d u s t
and
l i g h t
c o a l e s c e d
in
h u m a n
form
a
v i t a l
s t i t c h
of
the
m i c r o c o s m i c
w e a v e
perfect
h e a v e n l y
m a n i f e s t a t i o n
of
r a d i a n t
e n e r g y
k n i t
in
a
c e l l u l a r
b o d y
v i b r a n t
e s s e n c e
of
d i v i n e
c r e a t i o n
y o u ' r e
an
e l e g a n t
d a n c e
of
m i c r o s c o p i c
c o n n e c t i o n s
a
w a l t z
of
m a j e s t i c
e l e m e n t s
shaped
into
f l e s h
and
b o n e
r i c h l y
e x p r e s s e d
by
the
s o n g
of
e x i s t e n c e
as
a
u n i q u e
and
e x t r a o r d i n a r y
t o n e
y o u r
h e a r t
is
p u l s i n g
here
on
p u r p o s e
y o u r
b r e a t h
is
the
perfect
r h y t h m i c
r e s o n a n c e
y o u r
v i b r a t i o n
a
v i t a l
n o t e
that
m u s t
be
p l a y e d
l i f e ’ s
symphony
is
c o m p o s e d
of
your
p r e s e n c e
the
s p a r k
that
is
y o u
is
s a c r e d
v a s t n e s s
merged
for
y o u r
e s s e n c e
to
a l i g h t
y o u ’ r e
a
w o n d e r
of
the
i n f i n i t e
g a l a x i e s
a
u n i q u e
i l l u m i n a t i o n
of
r a d i a n t
l i g h t
About the Creator
Kristen Balyeat
Words fly to me on the wind, bump into me as I'm strolling the city, splash me in the face while I rest by the river, and shake me awake in the middle of the night—I’m humbly one of the vessels they use to come to life.
Also, i love you:)
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Masterful proofreading
Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Comments (29)
Top ìn every thing
Inspiring! ⚡♥️⚡
well written
Lovely and uplifting!
Very insightful and uplifting ✨🙏
Thank you, Kristen. You are this too. I needed these words today. Thanks Grz for pointing me in this direction. I feel like the universe is speaking to me today with the positive poems I am reading. Have a great day!
what a strange lovely story sister , you have a great work
Kristin, so beautiful! Will you please read the three poems I posted in the current love poem contest?
Wonderful
Wow I needed this! Very good 😊
I read this again and am so very impressed again. thank you!
Whoaaaa! Your poems are always brimming with positivity and are so uplifting! Not to mention mesmerising and so magical!
Great job on This Inspirational piece✨💖😉📝
I'm happy to say, "I told you so." 😉 Congratulations, Kristen!
Sooo gorgeous and inspirational! 🥹❤️ A truly divine and uplifting message 🙌🏼 You’ve excelled at creating a motivating light in all who read this 🤗
Superb!!!! I haven't read such creative poetry in a long time! Your work would fit our magazine and/or new anthology. You should send us something! If interested, here is more information: https://shopping-feedback.today/01/current-opportunities-for-writers-authors-and-artists%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E.%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Yes, nothing could make this poem better. You provide a mystical release in the light of scientific experience, bringing the commonalities between human earth and cosmos into a whirl. A true supernova!
I share these sentiments as an astrologer, but I could never write about them in this way. What a gift!
Whoa that's deep
Wow surreal experience reading this poem! ♥️♥️♥️❤️Absolutely love. Needs to read by all who are struggling ♥️
"I sing of the body electric." The Optimist's View: Before we were made the odds of any single one of us ever coming into being were astronomically high against. Every single last one of us is an absolute miracle of creation. The Pessimist's View: Once we're here, the odds of us being here are 1:1. Eh.
Whoaaaa, this was so powerful! Your words were magical and so uplifting! You always write such beautifully breathtaking poem!
🙌🌙✨ Kristen, the structure of this style of yours seems to always unexpectedly sneak up on me and be tremendously powerful! What a way of looking at things and if we could understand this and really affirm it! Wow. I really think this was the “sequel” haha I was asking for in my last msg. So thank you! ☺️
The imagery in this poem is so vivid and powerful.
So uplifting I could read this everyday as an amazing affirmation