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By RAOMPublished 29 days ago 1 min read

Muteness.

Faith approaches tentatively barefoot.

It brings with it

the fragrance of hot bread,

the metallic tang of old nails,

and the hidden dread lurking in the corners.

I tremble at its presence,

like a flame flickers in the wind,

and then Faith retreats.

I vacillate.

I petition to God.

I perspire.

The heart is large and heavy like a lead pencil.

The heart leaves marks on plain, unprinted pages...

Yet it continues to beat.

Sketch: a bare toe on cold tile, a candle flame dancing, beads of sweat, and sunlight coming through a window.

Lust.

Faith is way back at the window —

gazing at the shadowy street —

which disappears into the brightening dawn.

Faith's hands carry the scent of soap,

long-forgotten pages crammed with memories, and dust-covered letters.

Faith looks silently —

like a dog waiting for an owner

who may never return.

I am afraid of this silence,

but I nevertheless cling to it.

And this silence clings to me.

Sketch: a figure in the sunshine, hands on piles of dusty pages, a dog lurking nearby, and the street illuminated by the earliest rays of sunlight.

Gravitational Pull.

Faith kneels in humility in private —

The floor supports Faith's every breath, and all of Faith's whispers are filled with fear.

I clench my jaw,

as if I am a stone that retains moisture,

and I provide life to the echoes of memory…

EkphrasticinspirationalStream of Consciousness

About the Creator

RAOM

Turn every second into a moment of happiness.

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  • Janis Masyk-Jackson28 days ago

    I love the way your sketches went along with your poems. Both are very creative.

  • Whoaaaa, this was soooo deeeepppp! I freaking loved it!

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