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The pain I left deep inside of me
It resides in you so idly
I can't stay to watch you grieve
Let go or watch me leave
Best to let you be
Not what you need
I've lost you
Cost you
Love
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Erianna Gilliam
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This was soooo emotional and poignant. Loved your Nonet!
This was soooo emotional and poignant. Loved your Nonet!
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Pain and grief can be contagious. Great Nonet, Erianna! Well done!