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With My Last Breath

In this life and the next

By Marie381Uk Published 4 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

With My Last Breath

With my last breath, I will speak your name,

a softness lingering in the stillness,

a tender reminder of all we have shared,

the warmth of your love wrapping around me.

I’ll think of lazy afternoons kissed by the sun,

when laughter flowed like a gentle stream,

your smile illuminated the darkest corners,

filling my heart with light and joy.

As the world fades into quiet,

I will hold close our moments together,

the feel of your love touches my being,

a promise I feel within, deep and lasting.

Even as I drift into the unknown,

know that your love remains true and warm,

like music playing softly in the spaces between,

carrying you with me, forever united.

With my last breath, I will cradle our love,

a treasured memory I take beyond the veil,

and in that endless place,

I will seek you in the whispers of the stars,

Where our souls will dance through eternity.

like my love that lives an eternity for you.

in this and the next life I will be with you

As long as god lets us be.

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Calvin London4 months ago

    Absolutely lovely expression of feelings, Marie. It appeals to my romantic side.

  • Sid Aaron Hirji4 months ago

    nice and serene

  • Mark Graham4 months ago

    What a great and could be a perfect dream. Good job.

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