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Winter Night

The Sound of First Frost Entry

By Silver DauxPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
Honorable Mention in The Sound of First Frost Challenge
Winter Night
Photo by jesse orrico on Unsplash

It is midnight and it hovers.

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The air is thin with it, touched by smoke,

And full of darkness as sharp and clear as glass.

The temperature hangs in the night, palpable,

Hungry for warmth in that familiar, winter way

That claws at the skin and burns in the throat.

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I can hear you in the forest.

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The shape of your footprint is warm and obvious

Against the frost coloring the world silver.

It is not quite white, not when the blades of grass

And the still budding flowers stand erect

With their eroding dreams of seeing the first snow.

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I can taste you in the air.

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Crackling in the stillness with all the subtle threat

Of the great aurora borealis overhead.

You dance like frost in my veins, crystalise my heart.

I breathe out snowstorms around you.

What I wouldn't give to touch the furnace of summer...

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Your heart was a magmatic thing.

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It burned through autumn, caught fire in the trees.

The smoke settled in the river basin,

Played around with the meandering mist of winter.

And the world shifted from hot

To something I have never expected from you.

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The cold, it hovered.

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Geometric lines built their cities on dying leaves,

Crawled across the northern fields

Leaving a trail of pale starlight behind them.

And I settled into the feeling,

Wondering where I would meet your warmth.

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The winter night hovered no more.

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About the Creator

Silver Daux

Shadowed souls, cursed magic, poetry that tangles itself in your soul and yanks out the ugly darkness from within. Maybe there's something broken in me, but it's in you too.

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  • Marilyn Glover2 months ago

    Congratulations, Silver, on your honorable mention!👏😊

  • Test2 months ago

    I felt immersed in this right from the beginning SD!! My favourite line was "Against the frost coloring the world silver"... it just hit so perfectly for me!! Congrats on placing honourable mention in the challenege!!

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your honourable mention! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • L.I.E2 months ago

    Wow, such beautiful imagery in your words. Love it.

  • Archery Owl2 months ago

    Beautiful. I like the description of the footprint and taste in the air

  • the winter night hovered no more...what a fantastic line, leaving no doubt what came next...beautiful work

  • K.B. Silver 2 months ago

    absolutely beautiful. the last stanza it my favorite. 👏👏👏🌨️

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