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Warm air leaves my mouth
Turning white in biting cold
Life proved in a cloud
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About the Creator
Fathi Jalil
I’m a writer who loves sharing stories and making connections. Along the way, I learned how to make writing work for me. Now, I share what I’ve learned so others can too.




Comments (5)
This haiku makes me feel the cold and warmth at the same time...so delicate and powerful!
This feels momentary yet profound, like catching proof of being alive between seconds.
Brilliant idea for the challenge
Nice haiku for the challenge!!💗💕
Oooo, this was so beautifully written!