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Winter Breath

A haiku about internal heat

By Fathi JalilPublished 17 days ago 1 min read
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Warm air leaves my mouth

Turning white in biting cold

Life proved in a cloud

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Fathi Jalil

I’m a writer who loves sharing stories and making connections. Along the way, I learned how to make writing work for me. Now, I share what I’ve learned so others can too.

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  • F. M. Rayaan12 days ago

    This haiku makes me feel the cold and warmth at the same time...so delicate and powerful!

  • Aarsh Malik16 days ago

    This feels momentary yet profound, like catching proof of being alive between seconds.

  • Sid Aaron Hirji16 days ago

    Brilliant idea for the challenge

  • Nice haiku for the challenge!!💗💕

  • Oooo, this was so beautifully written!

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