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Will You Not Dance With Me?

A Poet’s Inner Struggle

By Karyn SavagePublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read
Will You Not Dance With Me?
Photo by Scott Broome on Unsplash

I prefer to write in rhyme and rhythm,

Following clear and definite rules.

I understand the metered system,

Taming words and poetic tools.

Oh free verse why do you taunt me

With your metaphores and deep descriptions?

I stare into an endless abyss,

Of unravelling thoughts

As though I may loose my grip

Altogether

of her heartbeat:

My sweet, sweet

poetry.

Bring me my ballad to dance with me!

Twirl me around in time and space,

Moving in tempo and leading me on,

In a predictable secure embrace.

In the quiet I hear the yearning still

To let every thought drift

As though in an ebbing tide of emotion:

Washing in and out.

Breathing, moving, forming.

Racing and charging forward with great speed.

Then still,

Soft,

Ever so quietly,

Oh free verse:

Will you not dance with me?

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About the Creator

Karyn Savage

A teacher, musician and writer at heart. I love painting pictures with words. Poetry and stories in rhyme are what I love to write the most. One day I hope to see some of my works for children in print.

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  • BEER BRAND3 years ago

    nice... so interesting

  • Poppy 3 years ago

    This is an amazing poem. You're very talented and I loved reading it!

  • Kris Griffith3 years ago

    Poetry is my temptress, my mistress, my forbidden love. I share my soul with it, and it shares the world with me.

  • Lots of fun playing with words in this poem. When you tap your feet while saying it out loud, you can hear the rhythm of words working together. You have put this poem together extremely well.

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