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Wild Walks

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By Katrina ThornleyPublished 3 years ago 1 min read

The route was tainted

Turned poisonous and stagnant

A sign beckoning travelers

To turn away-

Find a way around-

Despite the welcoming entrance

The wide open space,

The seemingly level ground-

Picture perfect pollution-

Swallowing the mind

And filling ears with screams

Of the lost and fallen,

A wrong step

A wrong look

And the evergreens swallow

Circling in-

Vultures on the hunt-

Intent to bring ruin-

Did you read the sign

Turn back

Turn away

Detour that way-

An arrow pointing along

A rutted road

Lined with boulders and briars

Stretching towards sky,

A wall meant to keep out-

Appearance of a fence

A trigger point-

Eyes double back

Turn back

Turn away

Questioning minds wander-

Afraid of a wall believed to hold in

Not to protect from preying monsters-

A deep breath

As curiosity emerges

And feet make their own way

Working through wilderness-

A freedom desired

Not direction

Despite the mass’s desire

To follow the same line

Presented by those before.

Katrina Thornley is a nature poet. novelist, and freelance journalist that resides in Rhode Island. She has two poetry collections currently published, a novel, as well as a short story anthology. Her poetry collections "Arcadians: Lullaby in Nature" and "Arcadians: Wooden Mystics" were inspired by a local park and life in her small rural town. You can find them on Amazon now!

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About the Creator

Katrina Thornley

Rhode Island based author and poetess with a love for nature and the written word. Works currently available include Arcadians: Lullaby in Nature, Arcadians: Wooden Mystics, 26 Brentwood Avenue & Other Tales, and Kings of Millburrow.

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock3 years ago

    An invitation to adventure, to seek, explore & discover. Ahh, I pity the mind that can see a sign that says, "Do not Enter," & not wonder what lies beyond. (Unless, of course, it's an interstate highway. That always makes me think "Planes, Trains & Automobiles".) Thoroughly enticing, poking & prodding our curiousity.

  • Dana Crandell3 years ago

    This is amazing. A metaphor for so many things. Well done!

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