Wild Thing,
I needed how tightly you held onto my
Waist,
And snuggled with me,
Your beautiful black hair against my cheek
and
That Gorgeous Smile—-I fell
Like I was about to
Fall
Like Alice,
In a deep, dangerous gaping pot hole like
I was
Way too lucky to feel safe.
Wild
Thing,
I loved how you shook my
Ground,
And we fell apart together,
And how I said, “I think I love you,”
And you said,
“Too early for that.”
Wild thing,
I felt your
Canceled love
Like
A punch,
And it threw me off too soon,
With you standing on top,
Blowing me a kiss.
Wild thing,
Your hips and your neck
And your lips
And your name,
I didn’t it cry into my pillow,
No,
But I sure felt the missing
Imprint.
Wild thing,
You were
There
Like an erotic whisper,
And I knew
It was too sweet to last,
Wild thing,
You ran out on me for another,
And you broke down
My
Love
Like a life raft caught
Up in a current.
Wild thing,
You used to sing,
And we stayed in bed all day together,
Watching our love on the screen,
And I missed you for awhile,
But I realized your beautiful smile—-
Was too wild,
And I collapsed into
Serenity,
No longer dreaming of you.
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Great poem
Fantastic poem!