Why, why, why, did you make me cry?
Tears falling, a silent, mournful sigh.
You left me alone, in shadows I stand,
A heartache deep, like grains of sand.
Your absence echoes in the silent night,
A void within, nothing feels right.
Promises shattered, dreams now broken,
Words unspoken, love forsaken.
I trace the lines of memories we wove,
In the of time, a story of love.
But why, oh why, did you turn away?
Leaving me alone, in the fading day.
Questions unanswered, lingering why,
A solitary tear, a heartfelt sigh.
Yet life moves on,
Why, oh why, did you make me cry?
Alone in this pain, I ask, oh why?
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khudai Noor
pen as his compass and creative mind as her material, has secured himself as a complex narrator in the scholarly domain. His stories, various in type yet reliably convincing, mirror a profound comprehension of the human experience.
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Such a sad poem... I hope you're okay...