Wholly whole holy holes
Black and swirly
Shimmer and shimmy
In the lightness of space
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Wholly whole holy holes
Clear and shiny
Flashing and flashy
In the weightlessness of space
In the weightlessness of space
Gaping and open
Curiously unhidden
Wholly whole holy holes
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In the lightness of space
Weird and Strange
Circles and lozenges
Wholly whole holy holes
Maybe there are many
Wholly whole holy holes
Floating in the weightlessness of space
Black in the lightness of space
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#NaPoWriMo2022
Continuing the 30 day National Poetry Month Challenge
Still 2 behind, but almost there!
First published: thecoatofmanypockets.com
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Whimsical Wanderer
Narrative threads are everywhere, weaving through realms and stories. Words are vital vibrations, connecting us to deeper truths. I joyfully dance with them, co-creating tapestries of meaning that resonate beyond the page.
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