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Who Wove It Better?

Itsy Bitsy... ....

By Colleen WaltersPublished 12 months ago Updated 12 months ago 1 min read

The web on the left shall be Exhibit A, and the one on the right shall be Exibit B.

Exhibit A is the neat and orderly type, goes to bed at a decent hour and gets up early. This rockstar knows the mission, and commits fully- no matter the weather or wind. There ain't nothing' gettin' in the way of this allstar arachnid. It's full- throttle with the symmetry and optical balance over on this side.

Now our neighbor on the right...Exhibit B is a classic case of late nights, early mornings, way too much cofffee and possibly the smoking of a little something(wink wink) This is a different kind of rockstar, mastering the abstract in a thoughtful way and adroitly blurring the lines. Everywhere.

Imagine being a fly. Just flying along, when you decide to take a little detour into the pasture and catch up on some horse manure- hang out with some friends, always a lovely treat on a Friday. And whooops! You swing right into the neat orderly web and go " wow, look at the craftsmanship in this thing, a true master wove this web! Look at the symmetry and balance here. Beautiful, just beautiful!"

Versus flying into the web on the right... you fly by and you're so disoriented by all the stuff going on in there... Your brain is fried by that whole "Tangled" thing and all you can muster is " what the...."

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Colleen Walters

Just a girl who likes to write poems, usually inspired by events and people in my Florida life.. Always be you, because you are awesome. You matter. You are enough.. ❤️

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  • Rowan Finley 12 months ago

    This is very creative and highly thought provoking!

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