When my throat is slit and a small red crimson fountain begins to flow,
When my breath chokes and a deep intoxication starts to surge within
When everything begins to blur into oblivion
When my body slowly begins to rot
When I swallow the poison and something writhes inside me — and I feel pleasure
The eternal ecstasy of final moments.
When I hang myself with a rope around my neck, and my eyes slowly begin to burst
When I leap from a great height, tasting the thrill of the fall
And before my body falls someone escapes from me — vanished
And death… death will save me from the fall.
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A/N: – Writing this was truly fun; I wrote it suddenly in less than five minutes. For me, this imagination felt completely normal 😀🤣
About the Creator
Karan w.
Writer || Poet || Author
Author of "The Resonance–Two Together-Lost Forever
All worlds collapse the moment they touch the ground of reality—worlds I once created. Yet I find my bliss in the dissolution of my creations
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Comments (3)
Oh wow, I read this yesterday, commented, and also replied to Maryam. But my comment is now missing but my reply to Maryam is still there. I forgot what exactly I commented yesterday but I loved your poem a lot
This is quite an amazing poem. That you wrote it in five minutes is sensational. Your poem masterfully flows from one line to the next and each successive thought brings the reader deeper and closer to the dark cave of gruesomeness you are describing. Excellent writing, Sk.
oh my! How did you have fun while writing this? Quite scary for me tho 😯 When you wrote, "something writhes inside me — and I feel pleasure" was like SHIT. I bet Dharr is gonna love this poem. Am I wrong? Poem is a masterpiece, written in just 5 minutess!! 👏👏