Who rode love?
A poem that tells the story of an arrogant lover

It is strange that a man thought women were
a gift until he grew old
and the women of the earth loved him from
a creation that was proud of him
and that they surrounded him, so he became even more astonished
and said in his seclusion: This is my happiness
and as if the houris were in his service
playing for him after singing
so he danced from his arrogance
and he did not know that the dance would end
and if they threw him
into the depths of deception, his praise increased
and as if the earth was his property
so he was proud of it, not caring
so they said: O John, this is the age, so does
a person fall in love with the fear of hardship?
The hand of the houris was cut off for him
With love from his beauty, the beauty of splendor
And if he did not answer the call
The eye's weeping increased
And if he passed by the neighborhood where
All the houris lose their modesty
And they say: Love overflowed
Every heart of the houris and love is one
The deceived one claimed that love had
Took the mind but the mind was not cut off...
And he saw that the one he loved had become
Searching for closeness to ascend to the sky
So he was deaf to others
So she became another living in secret
Whenever he said to her: No and she does not
Hope that he would move away by distorting
And she said if he flew to
others she would fly to him in space
And if he strayed from her she would catch up
With the passengers of love in the high air
And she said: I get what
I asked from him, my hope was not disappointed
So he returned and did not pay attention to her for a year
So she said: The trick of the ignorant
And after she reached her goal she mocked
him, he said: My effort Like dust
Tomorrow he will praise women's trickery
After he denied it on the day of satire
Tomorrow he will recite in his days
"Love of the houris is a bad omen"
The lost should not rejoice in it
But they will return from it disappointed
About the Creator
Kisama Riyo
I have always been interested in poetry and essay, especially rhyme style, so I decided to post my essay here and see if I have any talent in poetry or not.
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Gosh this poem hit me so hard! Loved it!