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Who needs Time

My clock forgot to Spin

By Jay LeTron DobbinsPublished 5 months ago 3 min read

When I saw you, time froze and there was no indication that it needed to move on! This will go right off the rip, I saw you effortlessly and lost control of my bottom lip!

I could care less of how many moons continue to come and go, but if another minute moves on without showing luv, I think the entire world would be covered in snow!

No luv-bombs here but I needed to take flight over your beautiful texture and landscape setting! This pass won’t take long because I don’t want to over stay my visit as my eyes wonder then my mind would take an unpleasant vetting!

However I would have to wonder about your day of creation! Was HE playing with our hearts as HE designed your freckle formation?

Surely, by now she’s completely taken! If not, the fools in this LA sun noodles must be baking! Yet, as I scrolled through your IG page, I saw a woman who could calm the worst storm’s relentless rage!

Saw one picture and could not release to image and I told my mind to “get her off me” it was so real, I was trying to push away and knocked over my mushroom coffee!

I’m writing to off the top, so please don’t stop me! If the grammar swings slightly below standard, I blame on the late night and the photos that stopped me!

I’m just a guy who calls it like I see it! Dreams of walking with you, holding hands and watching the night go by….. it’s now a wild dream, I just have to manifest and hope it fits! I know you’ve been told that you are the $h..

I know, an hour has passed and my clock lost it’s way and forgot how to move! Driving with you up the PCH could be a lovely groove!

What size is yo’ ring finger! Shawty what yo’ name iz? Sorry, my ALT came out but please remember my source of blame! Since I laid eyes on you, I will never be the same!

Somehow, if I didn’t shoot for the stars, I couldn’t see you glowing at night! I’m kinda shy, but when I saw you, you turned me into Kid Dynamite!

OK! Forgive me as the time must be getting late! However, it’s OK if it stands still, even on our first date!

Hey! If I never ask, then the answer will always be no! However, I could touch your heart like mother and give you many days of winter wonderland snow!

However, I know that if these words never make it to your eyes! I was man enough to put my thoughts to the romantic skies!

If I had this hour back, I would do it all over again! No telling you how I felt when I saw you would have been my greatest sin!

So if you ever live another moment and someone happens to tell you that you are far from enough, just walk the opposite way because I’m a firm believer that you have the good stuff!

May not have a chance to ever communicate with you on any other occasion! Just know with me you have an instant commanding persuasion!

For the rest of the night, it could snow, sleet, rain as it just won’t matter! My immediate goal with you is to hear the server explain the night’s feature platter!

Let’s share a smile together and just walk down the street and talk to each other! Let me one day take the chance to love you properly! Let me show you why I’m not like the common brother.

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About the Creator

Jay LeTron Dobbins

Casual writer! Love to express in print! Tell people how you feel and love life to the fullest with no regrets. Try to say something good about a person when they can hear it, and not when they are gone! Love like no tomorrow.

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