Who Am I ?
A seeker’s whisper between earth and eternity

I am not the face in the mirror,
nor the shadow following me home.
I am the question behind the question,
the silence after prayer,
the dust on a road that leads nowhere
and everywhere at once.
I am a breath
borrowed from the Infinite,
a spark hidden in clay,
a traveler carrying both longing and light
in the folds of my heart.
Some days I feel lost—
scattered like desert sand in the wind.
Other days,
I am the wind itself,
moving without needing to know why.
I am the flute in Rumi’s song,
hollowed so that the Beloved’s voice
can pass through me.
I am both the ache of separation
and the sweetness of union,
the tear that falls
and the ocean it returns to.
I am not finished,
and I am not fixed.
The soul is a river
that forgets its source
until it remembers.
If you ask me, Who are you?
I can only answer with a gesture
a hand pointing toward the sky,
another pressed against my chest.
Between the two—
that is where I live.
Who I am is not mine to keep.
It is a secret written in divine ink,
a name whispered by the stars,
a story still unfolding in the unseen.
About the Creator
Zakir Ullah
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