Whispers in the Fog
You think to stay in doors it’s safer? You can run but not hide

Whispers in the Fog
The air is thick, the moon is low,
A bitter wind begins to blow.
Through hollow trees and hollow bones,
A nameless chorus softly moans.
They drift beyond where lanterns gleam,
Thin as breath and lost in dream.
No footsteps mark the frozen ground,
No echoes rise, no beating sound.
A house stands crooked, old and gray,
Its door agape, its walls decay.
Yet something lingers, cold and deep,
Where restless voices never sleep.
They watch, they wait, they never tire,
Their whispers curling in the mire.
A hand unseen, a fleeting chill,
A shadow bent to match no will.
And should you walk this path alone,
They’ll trace your steps with fleshless tone.
A murmur here, a sighing there—
Until you breathe their ashen air.
Then night will stretch, the stars will drown,
Your name forgotten, dragged down, down.
No morning comes, Just spirits, wandering in fog.
About the Creator
Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️




Comments (6)
Yes, Mother Combs is right I felt chills as I read this poem. Good job.
I agree with Will, very Poe-like! Creepy-vibes
You really painted a scene very Poe esc
Nice work keep it up
I feel the creepy vibe, Marie!
Nice work. Super good Horror here. Keep it up.