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Whispers in the Fog

You think to stay in doors it’s safer? You can run but not hide

By Marie381Uk Published 12 months ago Updated 12 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

Whispers in the Fog

The air is thick, the moon is low,

A bitter wind begins to blow.

Through hollow trees and hollow bones,

A nameless chorus softly moans.

They drift beyond where lanterns gleam,

Thin as breath and lost in dream.

No footsteps mark the frozen ground,

No echoes rise, no beating sound.

A house stands crooked, old and gray,

Its door agape, its walls decay.

Yet something lingers, cold and deep,

Where restless voices never sleep.

They watch, they wait, they never tire,

Their whispers curling in the mire.

A hand unseen, a fleeting chill,

A shadow bent to match no will.

And should you walk this path alone,

They’ll trace your steps with fleshless tone.

A murmur here, a sighing there—

Until you breathe their ashen air.

Then night will stretch, the stars will drown,

Your name forgotten, dragged down, down.

No morning comes, Just spirits, wandering in fog.

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Mark Graham12 months ago

    Yes, Mother Combs is right I felt chills as I read this poem. Good job.

  • Mother Combs12 months ago

    I agree with Will, very Poe-like! Creepy-vibes

  • You really painted a scene very Poe esc

  • Pure Crown12 months ago

    Nice work keep it up

  • I feel the creepy vibe, Marie!

  • Nice work. Super good Horror here. Keep it up.

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