Whispers in life’s shadows
It’s all about our life

Whispers in life’s shadows
In the stillness, shadows creep,
A place where silence weeps,
No grand tales, no vibrant cheer,
Just raw truths, stark and clear.
Alleys twist, stories murky,
Echoes linger, lost in memory,
No playful sparks or sunny glances,
Only shadows craving chances.
Rusty iron, broken glass,
Remnants of lives that couldn't last,
Each step heavy, a weight we know,
In a world pulled down, laid low.
No wonder here, no colors bright,
Just the chill of an endless night;
Dreams slip away, quietly fade,
In spaces where warmth won’t invade.
Hearts beat slow, a distant drum,
Whispers of hope grow quiet, numb,
In darkened chambers, silence sprawls,
Where echoes linger, but no one calls.
This is where despair takes root,
Not in soft places, where comfort’s mute;
Each truth laid bare, no way to hide,
In the frost of existence, cold inside.
About the Creator
Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️
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Comments (3)
Sometimes the whispers have the answer, and I think you may have found yours. Good job.
You are a very good poet 🌹🌹🌹
I love the darkness in this. Very well done.