Whispers Across the Night
A quiet letter to the moon, tracing hope, light, and unseen companionship. Written for the "Letters to the Moon" Poetry Challenge.

Dear Moon,
You’ve watched the world move quietly, haven’t you?
The way lights go out in windows,
the way people stumble through promises—
and still, you rise.
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I’ve watched you slip through branches,
glow across rivers,
steady as breath in a sleeping child.
How do you keep shining
when half of you is always hidden?
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I talk to you because you never interrupt.
Because you don’t demand to be understood.
Because you’ve been here—
long before we gave names to our silence.
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Do you remember the night I stood in the street,
barefoot, whispering for a sign?
You turned your face just enough
to make the asphalt shimmer—
and I thought, maybe that’s what hope feels like.
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If I sent you all my quiet thoughts,
would you hang them in your craters
like lanterns of lost time?
Would you remind me
that even distance can be gentle,
that even silence can listen?
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You’ve been my witness,
my companion,
my reminder that light can return
after everything seems dim.
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With care,
Someone still learning how to shine fully.
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Aarsh Malik
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Comments (6)
I really love this one, so soul speaking really powerful, beautiful soulful poem thank you for putting up.
Wow! This is great!😊💕
A beautiful poem ✨
This was really beautiful.
Oh, yes, the amount of things this moon of ours has seem in her life! I can't even imagine, yet she still shines brightly. Great poem, Aarsh!
This is so tender and quietly powerful. I love how you’ve captured the feeling of talking to something that won’t judge.