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Whiskey and blood
Regrets over someone I used to know
By Kenneth cruzPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
He plays Someone that I used to know
While tying to forget her face
Chugs whiskey to fill the space
His fist meets the brick wall
Pain erupts, tears fall
Over it all
Blade meets wrist
Blood drips
Black
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Comments (3)
Very good poem.
Felt it
This was all too relatable. I'm so sorry if this was based on your personal experience