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Where Is Saturn?

A Grecian Sonnet

By Patrick M. OhanaPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
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Kronos* is rising again, my Goddess

I would love to kiss you there, Athena

Before I remove your underbodice

And you carry me to your arena

Zeus, the largest planet, will be renewed

As original names claim their renown

Greece on Gaea with nothing to allude

The past will catch up before the breakdown

Rome has gone to condign oblivion

After ruthless conquest through blood rivers

Rome is sinking like an Olympian

Who forgot the ground hangs on for givers

Athens ordained in virgin olive oil

As Pythagoras regains every coil

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* Kronos was the original Greek name of Saturn.

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Dedicated to yesterday, since today is dying and tomorrow does not exist.

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About the Creator

Patrick M. Ohana

A medical writer who reads and writes fiction and some nonfiction, although the latter may appear at times like the former. Most of my pieces (over 2,200) are or will be available on Shakespeare's Shoes.

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