🌧️ When You Remember Me
A Song of Rain and Remembrance

If ever I cross your mind someday,
Lose yourself in poems, let words softly play.
But promise me this, oh tender heart’s tone—
Let no tears gather in your eyes alone.
When evening falls, and silence deep,
Think of yourself before you sleep.
If in your dreams a river flows free,
Know that I come—your dream’s own sea.
When monsoon evenings turn astray,
And restless winds begin to sway,
Know I am there, in rain’s embrace,
Wrapped around your wistful face.
If ever you remember me once more,
Read the poems we wove before.
But keep your eyes from sorrow’s well—
Let no tear fall, no sadness dwell.
Open the window—look at the skies,
Let deep breaths in your chest arise.
Moments of dream will bloom anew,
Love will whisper its hush to you.
Send all your pain on exile’s road,
Let joy again be your heart’s abode.
If ever you remember me, softly so—
Dwell in poems, and let no tears flow.
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Shazzed Hossain Shajal
Passionate about exploring world stories—from breaking news to cultural transformations and amazing human encounters. I write about current events and why they matter, using facts and opinion to captivate readers.
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Comments (1)
This is beautiful. Rhymed couplets usually feel sing-songs to me and aren’t my go-to, heroic couplets especially, but your use of iambic tetrameter instead of iambic pentameter alleviates that, and I don’t find the rhyme intrusive. The emotion is conveyed so lyrically, with such lovely verbs and has such a linguistic resonance that it’s like a balm for the reader’s soul. Amazing.