It feels like I'm not breathing
I wish I could be the person I knew I needed
Sleepless nights, and barely eating
Thank The Lord for you
Punching bags,
and always screaming,
but you are always there to stop my bleeding
Thank The Lord for you
The pain in my chest
Only became apparent when you left
For a month straight I cried
I know you always wanted these brown eyes
My body is braking on the inside
My body is braking on the inside
It feels like I'm not breathing
I wish I could be the person I know I needed
Sleepless nights,
and barely eating
Thank The Lord for you
Punching bags,
and always screaming,
but you are always there to stop my bleeding
The pain in my chest
Only became apparent when you left
For a month straight I cried
I know you always wanted these brown eyes
My body is braking on the inside
My body is braking on the inside
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Frankie Martinelli
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Thank you for this. Heart felt definitely ✔️ and I can relate
This was heart wrenching and very relatable. A very beautifully written poem. I loved it!
So much emotion! Great poetry :)
I feel the pain! 🥰 let off the brakes, punch the gas, and live large. You deserve that. ❤️