
Unfortunately, you don’t see,
the beauty in me,
but that’s quite alright because one day you’ll know,
how much I was will willing to grow...
with you,
it's heart wrenching and painfully true.
The love, I live, and breath in, is lavish for you,
but, away from me, you grew and grew.
When my body is stagnant too long,
My mind convulses into a wild waving frenzy.
I have to wonder how much longer you'll wander toward greener grass,
as sheep, we're made to rest in green pastures, alas!
My tears will forever-drench the grassy spot,
where, one day, I hope you'll sit; I'm praying this is our lot.
About the Creator
Rowan Finley
Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.
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It’s like watching someone drift away while still hoping they find their way back. Love that "wild waving frenzy" line—it captures restless heartbreak so well!