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When the Rain Comes

It’s pouring every morning

By Forest GreenPublished about a year ago 1 min read
When the Rain Comes
Photo by Inge Maria on Unsplash

The water has poured down

Onto the reddish ground

No sun out today

The sky is filled with dark clouds and rain

Hasn’t yet to turn blue

The cold wind had blew

Especially when the sun rises

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Forest Green

Hi. I am a writer with some years of experiences, although I am still working out the progress in my work. I make different types of stories that I hope many will enjoy. I also appreciate tips, and would like my stories should be noticed.

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  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    Rainy days and Mondays. Rain is the element that clears things out most of the time. Good work.

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    You can hear the pitter patter of rain in the visual your poem evokes.

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