Carefully packed up our emotions
Marked the end of an adventure
The fate of loves erosion
The cost of surrender
The hearts explosion
Far from tender
We watched as
Love burned
Out
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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
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Rachel Reviews: The Spiral Archive by Pieter Hendrik
It's difficult for me to know where to start with a review of this book as it was, for me, an entirely unique experience and one that I'll probably never have again. I don't want that to be interpreted as unenjoyable but it has left me scratching my head a little and ruminating on its content, its themes and its characters.
By Rachel Deeming4 days ago in BookClub
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Beautiful piece. Well done, once again.
Commci, Commca. This French phrase came to me when I read the poem. Please picture a little cedilla under the second 'c'.
Love is so fickle; no one deserves to be with someone who doesn't value who they are, as they are. Wonderful bit of sad but true, Kelli!
Love the analogy. Fireworks are exciting.., but not long lasting. Great job.
I felt it burn out over these lines. Wonderfully penned, Kelli :)
Love how you tied it into fireworks!
mare sadness in a poem beatifully woven