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When the Ceiling Learns to Breathe

A Study in the Moment Before Gravity Speaks

By Marcus HillPublished 4 months ago 1 min read

It starts in the bones of the floorboards—

a slight persuasion,

as if weight itself were tired of loyalty.

Shadows lengthen without moving,

and the lamp hums louder

like it knows a secret.

No avalanche.

No horn.

Just the subtle refusal of angles to stay true.

Glass tilts before water does.

Time hesitates,

asks if it has ever been straight at all.

Somewhere in the chest

a gear unhooks—

you don’t hear it,

but suddenly every silence tastes metallic.

This is not falling.

Not flight.

More like a coin deciding midair

which face it will keep.

The ceiling sighs.

The floor inhales.

And the body,

without permission,

leans into the pull

as if forward had always been waiting.

fact or fiction

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