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When Cactus Talk

By Jan Portugal

By Jan PortugalPublished 5 years ago 1 min read

When Cactus Talk

They speak in fuzzy whispers

Long necks stretched upward so

The words shoot straight

Into Gods ear

Succulents grow close

to the ground picking up

Wisdoms from busy life

Creatures - thousands

Must pass before a whole

sentence is formed

Succulents are the gayest

Members of the cactus

Community they speak in

Plump delicate sentences

About the frivolity of

Social consciousness

Gossips and gadabouts

say the larger cactus

They never listen to them

They only listen to

The higher order

Of the slow growing life

Like the mountains

That send messages

with the clouds

Saying in defense

of the succulents

You must examine

The foundation of

Things or else

Be deluded by the

Illusion of power

When all you listen to

Is it’s lofty message.

inspirational

About the Creator

Jan Portugal

I love the adventure writing takes me on. I enjoy the idea of sharing them with an audience. I hope you enjoy my visions too.

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