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When Autumn Falls

The gentle transition from Autumn's warmth to winter's embrace.

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
When Autumn Falls
Photo by kuaileqie RE on Unsplash

Crimson leaves let go,

each flutter carries Autumn

to earth's waiting arms.

Haikunature poetry

About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.

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  • Caitlin Charlton4 months ago

    I love how you classified the leaves as something that lets go. The flutter carrying autumn. Oh that's a new draw for the imagination. Love the last line 🤗❤️

  • Sandy Gillman4 months ago

    Beautifully serene 🍂

  • Tiffany Gordon4 months ago

    Gorgeous! Go Tim! 💪🏾🎉

  • Imola Tóth4 months ago

    Great one! 🍂

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