What the Coals Remember
Where the last embers fade, the heart learns how to let go.

By the time the sparks stop
writing their brief constellations
into the dark,
The night has already moved on
without telling us.
The fire is smaller now.
a quiet red animal
curled in on itself,
breathing in shallow, glowing sighs.
We have run out of stories
big enough to match its heat.
You trace circles on your mug,
I study the black bark of the wood
as it falls inward,
Each crack is a soft surrender.
We used to make wishes
on flames this bright—
Now we just make peace
with whatever they’ve burned away.
The last tongues of light
lick at the edges of charcoal,
not hungry anymore,
only reluctant to leave.
They paint your face in flashes:
half in blazing memory,
half in the cool blue
of what comes next.
Outside, the cold waits patiently.
cheek pressed to the windows,
counting down the embers.
Inside, we sit in the hush
after the orchestra has stopped playing,
ears ringing with everything
We didn’t say.
When the final coal
shrinks to a dull, stubborn eye
and closes,
We don’t announce the ending.
We let the dark settle
like a blanket still warm
from someone who just stood up.
In the ash,
a thin line of heat
threads through the gray—
not a promise,
not yet—
just the simple truth
that even endings
stay warm
for a little while
after they’re gone.
About the Creator
Milan Milic
Hi, I’m Milan. I write about love, fear, money, and everything in between — wherever inspiration goes. My brain doesn’t stick to one genre.



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