What Survives the First Frost
A last breath before the cold
The cold came quiet.
A thin, unfinished breath
pressing itself against the world
as if choosing what to kill
and what to spare.
I saw it gather on the last yellow petals,
soft as mercy,
sharp as regret.
Ice clung to them like a final truth,
a glittering edge
between holding on
and being held down.
The flowers didn’t tremble.
They stood there.
Small, stubborn,
alive against the certainty of winter,
and something in me ached
at how familiar that felt.
The frost bit hard.
You could hear it in the grass,
each blade stiffening
like a spine learning to stay straight
in a season built to break it.
The air tasted of metal and memory,
the kind of cold
you only notice
when it starts to feel like honesty.
Light shifted,
not fading,
but surrendering,
laying itself gently
over everything that refused to bow.
It caught on the frozen petals,
turned them into something holy,
or lonely,
or maybe both.
And still they stayed.
Bright.
Defiant.
Already half-gone,
but refusing the silence
that comes before the fall.
I realized then
that autumn doesn’t end,
it endures
until it can’t anymore.
It stands in the frost
like those yellow flowers,
knowing it’s losing,
but still choosing
to stay warm for one more second
against the cold.
And I felt it,
that tender, impossible bravery
of something fragile,
unprotected,
still offering colour
to a world
already preparing
to forget it.


Comments (2)
Ravishing excerpt!
I loved every line of this, especially the way you write about the yellow petals refusing to bow to the cold. Beautiful work.