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What's Wrong

by Thomas Freese

By Thomas FPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
What's Wrong
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What's Wrong

I bottle up all my anger

I seem to hurt those i love

I tend to please the strangers

And push out the ones i Trust

My problems are rendered deep rooted

Too deep to even know

How can i fix myself?

And ease a troubled soul

So far i amount to nothing

Except to my family's headaches

This black sheep's dragging behind

And i feel that this black sheep's dead weight

My intentions are good natured

But my light will begin to turn dark

I sabotage my progressions

And discourage my train of thought

With pride in all I do

And I always do my best

What the fuck is wrong with me?

I must be afraid of my own success.

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About the Creator

Thomas F

I was shot in the face at point blank range with a double barrel 12 gage during an strong arm robbery that quickly turned into an Attempted Murder. Although I'm missing my right eye and a bullet in my brain. I AM STILL ME & I AM STILL HERE

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