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What life is

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By Marie McGrathPublished 11 months ago 1 min read
What life is
Photo by Julius Drost on Unsplash

I lay in bed as dark found light

and watched the rain

beating to the rhythm of my breath

I listened to the song

As I lay, time fled

and pictures of my shadow life

mouthed silent words

to me

That face saw me

in the mirror it raised

and spoke of now

But I could not hear

I saw the rain pool on my arms

as I lay

I counted the drops

the splash, the trickle

My life is rain

My face the drops

whose trickle flows

downwards to splash in

my river of time

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About the Creator

Marie McGrath

Things that have saved me:

Animals

Music

Sense of Humor

Writing

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  • Tales by J.J.11 months ago

    Beautifully captures the introspective and reflective moments of life.

  • Katherine D. Graham11 months ago

    lovely song...i could almost hear the music!

  • Komal11 months ago

    This has such a quiet, reflective beauty to it—like watching raindrops race down a windowpane while lost in thought.

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